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crap, just an experiment with light and so on.

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Image size
2121x1966px 2.62 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D90
Shutter Speed
1/5 second
Aperture
F/3.3
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
May 1, 2012, 11:56:35 AM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
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Firstly! Thank you for being active on DA!


Now the critique!
I quite like the colours and the muddyness of the picture, it has an overall grungy feel that works well with the subject matter! I would probably say play around with some interesting geometry, patterns, shapes and depth. You could get some really interesting work with burnt matchsticks I'm sure!

Also I would probably point the focal point is a little to the right of the main bit of the match stock in places, perhaps work on the positioning to make sure it works together as a whole!

Anyways! Keep up the hard work! I want to see fantastic work from you!