but i wants teh bonie!

This is a very nice picture. I think you have great composition in and the location you chose for the background is nice too. If you edited the colour and saturation, you did that very well too. Unfortunately, there are just a few small things that just stop it from being great.

We'll start with the fact that the first place i looked was a tiny bit out of focus. this was, of course, the eyes. So i looked to the nose, which was out of focus too. In fact, It took me a while to locate the focus point. which seems to be on the far ear. However, this is easy to do by mistake, and not notice when it's on your camera screen. So that's farmiliar.

The second area, is, while this is clearly the nicest composition of this kind of shot I've seen. It's the fact I've seen this kind of shot many times before. I'm not saying you need to be 100% original, since that's nigh-on impossible. but maybe rethink the angle.

I am very fond of this picture still though, and i hope to see more of your work in the future